Althalus
02-10-2003, 02:43 AM
I live with invisible pride
Inside the cold and dark catacombs of my mind
Thinking of what might have been
Thought will only hinder my progress
Inside the cold and dark catacombs of my mind
Thinking of what might have been
Thought will only hinder my progress
I must use the powers I have been given
To destroy and remake
To bring people
To drive away
I travel the road of death
The inevitable path
Through rain and blood
I will walk and run
Fighting
Struggling
I am a danger to the world
I am neither good nor evil
That is the worst one man can ever be
These words come from the depths of my merciless soul
I am your fear and your hope
I am who I am
And the world will fall with me
Until the new age arrives
RK
02-10-2003, 09:17 AM
short n easy to read poetry. now that’s what i like 😎 I don’t like reading long long poetry; only the short ones that have interesting words and have a good rhyme. Better than anything I can write : P. keep up the good work. I hope to see you post more in this thread. *huggles her pappy* ^_^
November
02-10-2003, 11:30 PM
…quite interesting…
it’s like i road map to your thoughts of yourself
it’s like i road map to your thoughts of yourself
Inside the cold and dark catacombs of my mind
i like that line a lot because in some ways the mind is a catacomb
with all it’s diffent parts that store different info and what not
ya really got a refreshing stye…no force rhymes….it’s natural where ever they occur…i like!
Autumn
02-11-2003, 04:38 AM
Good poem Phill~ Very realistic and emotional. Well done! ^_^