I’m makin this little comic about this vampire who moved into this house next to a girl. The girl hears strange noises nextdoor all the time. So she uses binoculars to see what’s always going on.. Sooner or later, she finds out he’s a vampire. After he knocks on her door for the first time, he stalks her. Heh. Just thought I’d describe what this cover is all about.. I wanted it to look like some old cheesey 80’s horror movie cover.
Good pictures though 🙂
The only thing that I’ve noticed is that in the picture of your friend, his left leg looks detached from the rest of his body. But other than that, very good job.
And don’t go overboard on wrinkles and such, Keep them focused on the bendy parts of clothing, like the elbows, knees, etc, and the places where they bunch up, so there’d be folds or wrinkles at the very bottom of the pants if they were oversized, but not necessarily around the shin area.