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My anger is no more
I regain control over myself
Nah, she ain�t acting like a whore
Acpo and I could’ve come up with that. As a joke. Not a serious poem.
It’s like you’re searching for a rhyme. It’s not from within. Do I have to write this every time to get it into your heads?
It just comes out as �er..�
I�m so into her
Oh god.
My god she�s so beautiful
She takes away my breath
When I�m around her
I no longer seek my death
I seek death because I read this poem.
I cry. I CRY.
Christ on a bike.
then what’s he gonna do? kick him in the balls…
oh yeah and that song is shit i read it thinking… bugger, some sort of diseased animal had spread their rabies infected faeces all over my monitor…. also if you think some sort of constructive criticism is on it’s way…. you’re wrong, this post is finished…. now
the trail’d echo of belles ringing
when charlmagne laughs,
im overriden with joy.
-sk, i like birds
Very few respect you because you’re stupid. I hope the stupid slut who actually fell for this awful crap gives you herpes.
Actually, I bet she didn’t really like it. If I got something like that I’d be totally creeped out, and to avoid getting stalked and even more obsessed over, I"d just tell the guy I liked it, so he’d leave me alone. TAKE THAT HOW YOU WILL
You make a point, but still where is the constructive criticism?
Saying this poem sucks or blatantly just calling a piece of shit is just the opposite of those who say a poem is great without any reason behind it. There has been nothing said at all that will help him become a better writer.
I guess you don’t care about your "writting" either, weave together some spelling.
You’re probably just bitter because he insulted your work too. Cry me a river, build me a bridge, and get over it.
Cry me a river, build me a bridge, and get over it.
Okay…
Cry me a river
Build me a bridge
Get over it
I’ll be waiting on the otherside
The meaning of river
To represent the tears
The reason why you shiver
The reason for your fears
The meaning of the bridge
To represent the way
Nothing rhymes with bridge
So walk towards a better a day
I’ll cross over and leave the old days behind
I’ll be waiting on the other end
Let the currents pass and the memories in time
I’ll be there my friend
I’ll get over it…
We’ll cross that bridge together
OWNED
Kyouto, you’re nothing special. The only reason I don’t give you the same level of shit as everyone else is because you actually seem to put a moment’s thought into what you write.
These people come here to have their works needlessly praised for their mediocrity. I refuse to do so, so I approach it from a different – in fact, the opposite – angle. I’ll be sure to just not bother with you in the future. You’ve had spelling and grammar faults in your writing, and I’ll be sure to now highlight them, possibly with a larger font than usual.
Prick.
I appreciate that.
These people come here to have their works needlessly praised for their mediocrity. I refuse to do so, so I approach it from a different – in fact, the opposite – angle. I’ll be sure to just not bother with you in the future. You’ve had spelling and grammar faults in your writing, and I’ll be sure to now highlight them, possibly with a larger font than usual.
Be my guest, use color if you find it necessary. I’m trying to improve as much as I can.
Would appreciate if this thread was closed.
Um…no comment. 🙁
sk, sk
you’re sort of a man
but you don’t like
tits
or cocks
what’s up with that
poem
poem.
will you ever remain true?
in face of these waves of tension,
no one can suppress the passion
that I have for you! 😉
i love you
poem
word.
also, I’m afraid your song was fairly horrible. It needs to actually sound unridiculous.