Elle
01-04-2007, 02:57 PM
If I cry
no one will see my tears
no one will see my tears
If I laugh
no one will notice my smile
If I’m in pain
no one will notice my suffering
But
If I fart
just once
they all will notice
Prak
01-04-2007, 03:06 PM
Laffo
Lukey
01-04-2007, 03:10 PM
;_;
that was beautiful
barretboy14
01-04-2007, 05:34 PM
Haha, :-[
Jarosik
01-04-2007, 05:38 PM
Gr9! 🙂
TK
01-06-2007, 11:04 PM
I was going to criticize this until I got to the end, where it became fantastic.
Mailbox
01-07-2007, 08:08 AM
I was going to criticize this until I got to the end, where it became fantastic.
DestroytheMap
01-07-2007, 08:44 AM
I was going to criticize this until I got to the end, where it became fantastic.
Haha, I felt much the same. Nice little twist on the typical "no one cares" poem.