The first two chapters in all of their glory.
I have much more written, but I wanted to share just that much with you all to see what others think and in the hopes that people will give me some helpful criticism. Kindly let me know if I’ve succeeded in staying true to the characters thus far, as that has been my highest priority. I have taken some license with the story and minor characters in an effort to improve the story beyond its gaming origins. I will not be putting any more of it on to the internet, as I plan on presenting the finished work to Square Enix for possible publishing after I have completed it.
The sampler encompasses all events in the game leading up to where Cloud is about to fall into Aeris’ church.
Use the toolbars on the right of the fanfiction.net screen to navigate between chapters.
– Puddles123
P.S. – And, just a forewarning, it is approximately 40 pages single spaced in its entirety.
While many fans will know what these areas look like, in order for the game to become a novel it really needs to be treated in such a way that if the book were to be accidentally read by someone who has not played the game; that they can still understand and enjoy it.
I also saw from another thread of yours that you have not seen a complete, well I completed one in January 2008 called ‘Curse of memory’ Good luck with yours and I hope you do well.
Do you have a link to this fully completed novelization of yours? I would be curious to see it…
As for mine, yeah I have a link, don’t want to be seen as spamming but as there is no private messaging feature I have no option really. Interestingly now that this one is finished I have actually started re-writing it and some of that is published to, but I digress, here we go: –
Out of curiosity, and if you have time to explain, I would love it if you could tell me what your biggest challenge was writing your own novelization. Also, any more detail you could give me on what I need to improve on in my own story and what I do well would be invaluable while it is still fresh in your memory. Thanks again for reading it and letting me know your thoughts on it.
Something I would do as a filler.
Curse of Memory Chapter 1: The Edge of Darkness, a Final Fantasy VII fanfic – FanFiction.Net (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1138642/1/Curse_of_Memory)
Is this absolute fan fiction or is this the actual story of FF7?
Out of curiosity, and if you have time to explain, I would love it if you could tell me what your biggest challenge was writing your own novelization. Also, any more detail you could give me on what I need to improve on in my own story and what I do well would be invaluable while it is still fresh in your memory. Thanks again for reading it and letting me know your thoughts on it.
I found this by chance while looking online to see what other novelisations were like. I have seen many and took a gander at yours, while it has good dialogue, it has too little description to stand up as a novel. Inside the reactor, for instance, aside from Cloud grabbing some handrails nothing is really described about the environment they are in.
While many fans will know what these areas look like, in order for the game to become a novel it really needs to be treated in such a way that if the book were to be accidentally read by someone who has not played the game; that they can still understand and enjoy it.
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