Noa’s poetry, lyrics, and general ramblings



lenneth
08-18-2003, 02:49 AM

Riana
08-18-2003, 03:10 AM
Wow, those are great poems there. I loved Yellow Fields. ^__^

I do hope you can show more.


Autumn
08-20-2003, 07:45 AM
Prettiful poems Cassie. Very good and original. Keep on writing~

Bahamut ZERO
08-20-2003, 11:00 AM
I like~

I’ll continue traveling on
Through this eternal confusion
Hoping pain and suffering leave
And pray it was an illusion

The power within these four lines conveys a lot of emotion, uncertainty, pain. It’s a beautifully crafted poem.

Keep up the good work.


lenneth
08-20-2003, 10:48 PM

Autumn
08-21-2003, 05:44 AM
Another batch of good poems Noa. I like the way you can express your feelings in poems without resorting to rhyming. You sure have talent, so keep going at it.

Deja
08-22-2003, 12:37 PM
Nice~~

I like your style, it’s very good. Youre older poems I really enjoyed reading, esspecially Yellow Fields. Keep posting ๐Ÿ™‚ **encouragement encouragement**


lenneth
08-23-2003, 11:41 PM

Alexiel
08-24-2003, 01:36 AM
*huggles Cassie*

Your pain is my pain. For we both went through the same thing at the same time..

Beautiful and deep. I like your work. Check out my lil corner when you get the chance.


lenneth
08-24-2003, 05:13 AM
Ironically, Black Sun was written a day before I was informed of any of it. I will check out your corner sometime too.

Drea
08-24-2003, 05:59 AM
Aw hell. GROUP GLOMP!

*glomps Heathers and Cassie*~ You guys are mah sweeties.

Enough SPAM!

Anyhoo, Cass, I like your poems, they are some deep, powerful shit borne out of heartache, I can tell. I like them, and I can relate.

*sigh* I know how you feel… Black Sun made me get all teary eyed because… ah…

… Keep it up~ ๐Ÿ˜€


lenneth
08-24-2003, 08:10 PM

Drea
08-28-2003, 05:39 AM
I like that poem. It reminds me of someone… mmm….

But it’s very refreshing and beautifully blunt. ^_^

I like your work. Maybe your and Heathers could inspire me. I’ve got a block~


lenneth
09-10-2003, 12:40 AM