I do hope you can show more.
I’ll continue traveling on
Through this eternal confusion
Hoping pain and suffering leave
And pray it was an illusion
The power within these four lines conveys a lot of emotion, uncertainty, pain. It’s a beautifully crafted poem.
Keep up the good work.
I like your style, it’s very good. Youre older poems I really enjoyed reading, esspecially Yellow Fields. Keep posting ๐ **encouragement encouragement**
Your pain is my pain. For we both went through the same thing at the same time..
Beautiful and deep. I like your work. Check out my lil corner when you get the chance.
*glomps Heathers and Cassie*~ You guys are mah sweeties.
Enough SPAM!
Anyhoo, Cass, I like your poems, they are some deep, powerful shit borne out of heartache, I can tell. I like them, and I can relate.
*sigh* I know how you feel… Black Sun made me get all teary eyed because… ah…
… Keep it up~ ๐
But it’s very refreshing and beautifully blunt. ^_^
I like your work. Maybe your and Heathers could inspire me. I’ve got a block~